Thursday 20 August 2020

6 Sentences

Six-sentence story

Sentence 1: Start with ‘Once upon a time’ and introduce the main character done
Sentence 2: Describes where the character lived done
Sentence 3: Describes where the character’s special talent
Sentence 4: Describes the character’s problem done
Sentence 5: Tells why the character felt that way happy when had a job 
Sentence 6: Tells how the character solved the problem  done


1. Once upon a time there was a girl name Gabriela Wood
2 In her hometown Auckland,Gabriela Wood is known for being very nice and polite to people.
3.Gabriela lives in a full house with her parents and brothers but they are not doing so well because they broke.
4.Gabriela has an ability to make people happy whenever they see her because she's so polite and respectful.
5.
The problem is that her family are very violent with her dad always hitting them all the time for no reason.
6.She felt scared of her dad because if she told him how she felt he would have hit her and she would cry.So she told her dad and he hit her but after that they came to an agreement that he wouldn't hit her anymore.

1 comment:

  1. Julius good work on this piece of writing. What unfolds in this six sentence story is very sad. I hope you will get a chance to re-write this and permission yourself to write more of how dad comes to understand that his way was wrong. Julius in your next 6 sentence story, remove the template and numbers. Keep going!

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